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(Contains: sexual themes and violence/gore)
On my back, tense, I wait
Your knife gleams in the firelight
anticipation; burning, great
your eyes glistening with delight.

Bring it down upon my skin
and slice it like a fresh, ripe peach
to find the sweetness there within
and suck it from me, like a leech.

I bleed for you, to quench your lust
as you thrust against my trembling thighs
I'm spilling sweetened liquid rust;
your satiation is my prize.

And when we're done you'll stitch me back
the way I was before
Until the next sharp breathed attack
that leaves us wanting more.
I think that the classification of this poem under Romantic>Erotic might be slightly misleading, but I honestly didn't know what else to put it under. But hey, I find it erotic.


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:iconthegoblinquill:
I don't know what to tell you. Don't judge a poem by its title, maybe?
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ThePoeticPaladin Feb 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I didn't know it was a poem, just saw the title and was curious.
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UndeadPareidolia Feb 2, 2012
That's amazing! o:
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:iconthegoblinquill:
Thank you! :heart:
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